PortalDown

[IRGNW]

What for u add generic_unhookable and generic_unhookable7.0?

[Evoli]

i will take a look on this map

[Evoli]

So i have tested this map with a dummy, and i must say
you have really nice ideas
to creative parts.
They have a balance between easy-hard parts
this is a perfect moderate map from 2-3 stars.
Keep this mapping you have a brain where you can create really nice parts.
Sadly... this map contains a lot of bugs and some weird looking, where your eyes are hurting.
This map needs more platform and more place, because some parts are so tight that you wont pass it.
this background is to dark with the hole gameplay,if you are playing this map on the day, it is hard to see
where freeze and the teleport are placed.
You can make the background more lighter to get a better look on this parts.
I make some screenshoots what you can
change ( your choice if you want to do it).

you dont have to place so much shields.

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you can mark it too ( but you dont need it, if you want)

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you need to mark it correctly

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give this teleports more space between the teleports

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you forgot to delete here something

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change the colors or make it darker its dangerous for people who have problems with this colors

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give this more space, it is so fucking small,
that you would rage, if more tees are blocking this way

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give this part more space and switch the tele
each other its more better

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place the tele one tile about this ground
(do more space/platform

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this part needs more platfrom

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i dont know if you like it to do freeze after walls
but you forgot to mark it there

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you forgot to add there hook.
(do more platform)

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give this part a chance to like it and not to hate it

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you should place this teleport somewhere else

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you should mark here something,because i dont know what this part wants from me.

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do it in other colors,because the players will thing you can hook through( or place there hookthrough,your choice)

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this tele is not good placed, make more space

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give the tees a chance to go back, like you did it in the other parts

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[Deeper]

So i have tested this map with a dummy, and i must say
you have really nice ideas
to creative parts.
They have a balance between easy-hard parts
this is a perfect moderate map from 2-3 stars.
Keep this mapping you have a brain where you can create really nice parts.
Sadly... this map contains a lot of bugs and some weird looking, where your eyes are hurting.
This map needs more platform and more place, because some parts are so tight that you wont pass it.
this background is to dark with the hole gameplay,if you are playing this map on the day, it is hard to see
where freeze and the teleport are placed.
You can make the background more lighter to get a better look on this parts.
I make some screenshoots what you can
change ( your choice if you want to do it).

thank for test :ь

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sry for bad english

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[BamBam]

Hmm, pretty good map, quite unbalanced though. Try putting red teles on the portals to make them lose velocity.
I guess make the first part a bit harder as it is like novice 3* now xD. And the colors DO cause eye cancer they are so different and bright, it is not pretty to look at. Try making them all a little darker.

[Deeper]

Final version?

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[Deeper]

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[deen]

There are a few strange things to me, like the background not being exactly round (use aspect ratio). Can someone take a final look?

[Ñı©Ø]

deen the bg it's not made with different quads, it's just an .png... with the circle thing hardcoded...

[Lady Saavik]

and whats the problem with using acept ratio on it?