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Re: Zleader - The PcP clan presentantion!

Posted: Mon Dec 26, 2016 11:57 am
by Cellegen
Jimmy Jazz The 1st wrote:No offense but you should try making a single map for at least a few months before posting it. At this rate i've seen you post a new map every few days. Literally. Maybe this is why all your maps are being rejected? Try stay focused on a single project so you can get the feel for what exactly you are doing. Just my opinion bro :) Good luck.
Omfg dude, the map is created by the f.ckin pcp clan 1 months ago xD LOL
I just post it
However, we made it for new year... new start... better maps :-)

Re: Zleader - The PcP clan presentantion!

Posted: Mon Dec 26, 2016 12:00 pm
by Cellegen
Ninjed wrote:I will not help you sorry, i have much own maps which took time.
Okay i fix it when im in home. 29 of dec

Re: Zleader - The PcP clan presentantion!

Posted: Mon Dec 26, 2016 12:05 pm
by Jimmy Jazz The 1st
It still applies because you are posting new maps every few days. So just try invest a bit more time into each project.

Re: Zleader - The PcP clan presentantion!

Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2016 10:09 am
by Cellegen
Jimmy Jazz The 1st wrote:It still applies because you are posting new maps every few days. So just try invest a bit more time into each project.
.______. Not every day.

Re: Zleader - The PcP clan presentantion!

Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2016 10:22 am
by Jimmy Jazz The 1st
every few days.
You have posted 8 maps over the past month and a half.

I am not saying your work is bad or anything, because your maps look quite interesting. But yeah, time & testing is the key :)

Re: Zleader - The PcP clan presentantion!

Posted: Tue Dec 27, 2016 1:20 pm
by Cellegen
Jimmy Jazz The 1st wrote:
every few days.
You have posted 8 maps over the past month and a half.

I am not saying your work is bad or anything, because your maps look quite interesting. But yeah, time & testing is the key :)
Okay....... thanks.... i dont forge it :/

Re: Zleader - The PcP clan presentantion!

Posted: Wed Dec 28, 2016 8:23 pm
by Cellegen
[color=#000000]Fixed deadline
Fixed one cheatable part
Added a part[/color]
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Re: Zleader - The PcP clan presentantion!

Posted: Thu Dec 29, 2016 9:15 pm
by VipeR
These Images need to be Embedded.
Also 2.3 mb is too much. try to reduces the size of your map.
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Re: Zleader - The PcP clan presentantion!

Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2016 12:38 am
by Cellegen
Did 1.6 mb

[color=#000000]The size of the map is shorter[/color]
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Re: Zleader - The PcP clan presentantion!

Posted: Fri Dec 30, 2016 10:53 pm
by Welf
I took a look at it
1.6 mb is too much, the map needs a good design or alot of gameplay so 1.6 would be worth.

The parts aren't really interesting (as far as i understood them, i didn't understood the 5 doors part below spawn)
You spammed alot of edgejump, which is not really entertaining, the map is not really interesting for pros (i didn't see any creative or well mapped parts)
If you want to see some good parts in this faily style, check out some verification maps, they are kinda challenging and interesting (not all)

for me the map is annoyingly faily so i wouldn't play it

the background has the same tileset as the unhookable tiles, that is not really good, because it is very confusing

So all in all i don't see how this map could be enjoyable for the majority of brutal solo players so i will put this into archive
as always you could rework the map, but it has some major problems, so i would rather suggest you to make a new map
I am sorry for the work you put into this map