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Re: The East Desert by Lumina & Sheep [Moderate]

Posted: Wed Feb 08, 2017 6:26 pm
by Lumina
For Wartopeth.

I made the deep part easier, should be less stressing for tees.
Thanks about the critic about my design, that will help me.

About jao's Suggestions

i have made some suggestions about the screenshoot.

until screen 8.

i know it is very useless, but it is for guys for forgot to undeep there tee before a part, and lands to the next part and is still deep, so you can drag him back and do the part again to undeep your tee, what i mean:
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Thats all what i wanna fix on our map.

If you have questions you have to meet me online so we can talk for real.

Updated Version :
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Hope you can understand me.

Re: The East Desert by Lumina & Sheep [Moderate]

Posted: Wed Feb 08, 2017 8:17 pm
by Wartopeth
Well, I tested it again (last version) because I liked the map.
I think I told you, The noob filter is useless if even a noob (like me) can skip it (demo).
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And I don't see any improvement in the background, I think you just added doodads everywhere.
Whatever, here some suggestions:
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That's all, have a nice day!

Re: The East Desert by Lumina & Sheep [Moderate]

Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2017 2:53 pm
by Lumina
made some changed about the map from the screens ( but not screen 1. )

The filter will be there how it is now, it will be not changed.
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Re: The East Desert by Lumina & Sheep [Moderate]

Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2017 4:29 pm
by Silex
That's just like : no i don't want the fix the useless part which you can skip easy!
Just because you are a tester you can't block suggestions from others, but it seems like it's difficult for you to accept help. Some people already said the design looks not really special and is not that enjoyable. The stones behind the desert_main is new yeah great, but it looks shit. About the noobfilter i don't got to say anything because jao and wartopeth said it. I don't see why a map should get released if the mapper is not even ready to implement suggestions (from more people than just 1).
I should not teach a 'tester' lessons like this.

Re: The East Desert by Lumina & Sheep [Moderate]

Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2017 5:46 pm
by Sheep
I have changed the filter, now you have to pass through the filter, noone can drag you up anymore.
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Lumina, I have to agree with the tester.
You should stop ignore suggestion from tester/player.
They just wanna help you, you should accept it.

If the design doenst looks good, complain by more tees,
than you should really change it.

I have told you several times that you should accept some help to improve your design.
Wartopeth is a great designer you can get help from him how to design the map better.
Accept the help.

Thats all from me.

Re: The East Desert by Lumina & Sheep [Moderate]

Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2017 5:58 pm
by RayB.
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still need to fix the filter thing here

Re: The East Desert by Lumina & Sheep [Moderate]

Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2017 8:47 pm
by Wartopeth
I could rework design if you want.

Re: The East Desert by Lumina & Sheep [Moderate]

Posted: Fri Feb 10, 2017 11:17 pm
by Sheep
Wartopeth wrote:I could rework design if you want.
I'll will apprecitate your help.

Please do me a favor,

and please give Lumina and me a tutorial or a explain, how you would design the map. ( you can also do it per pm )
That will help us, how to improve a design.
But remember Wartopeth, you cant force someone to make a better design, just because you ( or more tees ) dont like the design. Thats not the right way to help one, so please be patient next time, and think what you are writting next time.


About RayB.

im sorry, but i cant understand the screen from 1.
What exactly do you want?
About the Seccond Screen.
You have to go though the rocket part, there is no other option for the filter.

Re: The East Desert by Lumina & Sheep [Moderate]

Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2017 2:15 am
by Wartopeth
Sheep wrote:
Wartopeth wrote:I could rework design if you want.
I'll will apprecitate your help.

Please do me a favor,

and please give Lumina and me a tutorial or a explain, how you would design the map. ( you can also do it per pm )
That will help us, how to improve a design.
But remember Wartopeth, you cant force someone to make a better design, just because you ( or more tees ) dont like the design. Thats not the right way to help one, so please be patient next time, and think what you are writting next time.
First of all, there are very good tutorials made by the community to improve the design (I learned there). It would be good take a look if you don't know something (and experiment) or in special cases, ask to someone with more experience :D.
Of course, I will send you a PM explaining certain things that personally looks bad and things that other people also thought and could be fixed.
I think you don't understand what this section is about. I am a tester, and that's why I suggest certain things to improve your map, not annoy you.
I suggest you read my post again, I've never been impatient or insulted you, I even offered my help to improve it, so please don't confuse the things. Also I am not the only one who thinks the same about the design and the skip of the beginning (noob filter) that you didn't want to fix.
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Last part next to the finish line
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Re: The East Desert by Lumina & Sheep [Moderate]

Posted: Sat Feb 11, 2017 8:56 am
by RayB.
Sheep wrote: About RayB.

im sorry, but i cant understand the screen from 1.
What exactly do you want?
About the Seccond Screen.
You have to go though the rocket part, there is no other option for the filter.
I've changed the colors and bg of your design.