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Cybernet by Cyberpunk

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This is a little solo map I did, its a 30 second map. Really easy and fun. First ever map. Criticism is welcome. :D
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Re: Cybernet by Cyberpunk

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Hey,
you didn't embedded any of the tilesets you used. So, the map is nearly unplayable right now.
Please embed the used graphics and reupload map (see screenshot)
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just used desert_sun as an example
just used desert_sun as an example
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Re: Cybernet by Cyberpunk

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Sorry about that, new to this whole thing.
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Re: Cybernet by Cyberpunk

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Cyberpunk wrote:Sorry about that, new to this whole thing.
No problem, you'll get used to it over time.

Ok, so I quickly tested the map. It's indeed a very short map (about 35-50 sec) with just standard parts, nothing unusal or new. Don't get me wrong, the tileset is nice and for your first map (or at least on of your first maps) it's quite good, but idk if we should take it :(
However, here are a few things that I noticed while playing:
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remove hookable, so this part is a little bit more challenging (+ the shotgun isn't that useless if you remove the hookable tile)
remove hookable, so this part is a little bit more challenging (+ the shotgun isn't that useless if you remove the hookable tile)
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invisible tiles
invisible tiles
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that doesnt look nice + the spikes do not really fit to the tileset :(
that doesnt look nice + the spikes do not really fit to the tileset :(
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place the blue outlines there too
place the blue outlines there too
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Re: Cybernet by Cyberpunk

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+ left up pink corners are ugly (because of tileset)
use other and mirror/rotate them so they fit

you don't want to make few more parts?
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Re: Cybernet by Cyberpunk

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I will work on it. Thanks guys :)
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Re: Cybernet by Cyberpunk

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Deen you can kill this thread. I am not going to finish this map.
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