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PortalDown

Posted: Sun May 10, 2015 11:09 am
by Deeper
test my map, my friends
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Trailer:
[bbvideo=560,315]https://youtu.be/VsbC-Brj42E[/bbvideo]

Re: PortalDown

Posted: Fri May 15, 2015 4:17 pm
by Ryozuki
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A bit boring but some parts are good.

I think the map need more balance some parts are like mod 4 and others like novice 1

Re: PortalDown

Posted: Sat May 16, 2015 9:05 am
by Deeper
Ryozuki wrote:
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A bit boring but some parts are good.

I think the map need more balance some parts are like mod 4 and others like novice 1
thank for TEST my map

im fixed all bugs
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Re: PortalDown

Posted: Sat May 16, 2015 1:56 pm
by Spyker
Nice map with some original parts, a bit unbalanced... I think it need redesign, for add more quality in the map..

(next time ask to me for a trailer :P)

Re: PortalDown

Posted: Sat May 16, 2015 7:03 pm
by Ñı©Ø
Spyker wrote:Nice map with some original parts, a bit unbalanced... I think it need redesign, for add more quality in the map..

(next time ask to me for a trailer :P)
You're right. The parts are unbalanced too... in some parts you need just a CP for balance it... this map have good ideas, but really it seems to "empty". Maybe it will be better with a good bg! Here there are some bugs/suggestions! I said ( if you want ) in the suggestions!
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Re: PortalDown

Posted: Sun May 17, 2015 5:09 pm
by Deeper
Ñı©Ø wrote:
Spyker wrote:Nice map with some original parts, a bit unbalanced... I think it need redesign, for add more quality in the map..

(next time ask to me for a trailer :P)
You're right. The parts are unbalanced too... in some parts you need just a CP for balance it... this map have good ideas, but really it seems to "empty". Maybe it will be better with a good bg! Here there are some bugs/suggestions! I said ( if you want ) in the suggestions!
Thanks for the test, I hope in the future you will be given the post of "Tester"


I've fixed a lot of bugs
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    7- (if I do that, the part will be easy)
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    10- (I think it's not worth doing)
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Re: PortalDown

Posted: Sun May 17, 2015 5:29 pm
by Ñı©Ø
Ty

Also you can remove star quads because you don't use it!
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The bg it's not so cool... so... i had an idea! I found a good bg for your map, but you have to put it from yourself, because i haven't last version! Just save the image of your BG in your mapres ( ddnet folder/data/mapres ) open your editor and pick this bg ( remember to embed it ) This is the amazing effect with this new BG!
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THE BG IMAGE IS DOWN THERE ↓ ( i re-sized it for let it go better on teeworlds )

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Re: PortalDown

Posted: Sun May 17, 2015 5:52 pm
by Deeper
Ñı©Ø wrote:Ty

Also you can remove star quads because you don't use it!


The bg it's not so cool... so... i had an idea! I found a good bg for your map, but you have to put it from yourself, because i haven't last version! Just save the image of your BG in your mapres ( ddnet folder/data/mapres ) open your editor and pick this bg ( remember to embed it ) This is the amazing effect with this new BG!

thank you very much for BG, I can your nickname be specified at the end of the map

Re: PortalDown

Posted: Sun May 17, 2015 6:15 pm
by Deeper
UPDATE
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add BG (thank nico)
add text : thank NICO [img]finishby.png[/img]
fixed bugs

Re: PortalDown

Posted: Sun May 17, 2015 10:48 pm
by Ryozuki
portal 2 best game (tw too)