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amanhecer

Posted: Sat Mar 19, 2016 11:08 pm
by Gulino
My first map, please test

Re: O Amanhecer

Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2016 1:10 am
by Fňokurka oo7
Hi.
I was hoping, that you checked mapper rules before posting. That didn't happen.

- map is really short
- rather standard old style parts (usually more anoying than fun)
- blue tele everywhere (use red instead)
- bugs


This map wouldn't be bad, you just need to put more effort in that. Make more parts, change some of your anoying parts, look for best alternatives. And try to find all bugs - especially hookthrough bugs.

And grass as hookable looks really weird there. ._.
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I think, that this can go to archive for now, until mapper posts new version or new map.

Re: amanhecer

Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2016 7:05 pm
by Gulino
Hello, I am beginner, I live in Brazil, use the google translator to post, where I find the rules to post, could not find to read, I sending a new map update with the suggested changes, make sure I'm doing right in posting and on the map, as the forum is only English have difficulty understanding, thank you, update map attached

Re: amanhecer

Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2016 7:30 pm
by Fňokurka oo7
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And yes you made it correctly.

Re: amanhecer

Posted: Sun Mar 20, 2016 11:44 pm
by Gulino
My map is right?

Re: amanhecer

Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2016 3:15 am
by Pepe
As Fnokurka said... read the mapping guide, map it's not creative. Good luck the next time :D

Re: amanhecer

Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2016 12:37 pm
by Gulino
It is not creative? ok ... I will do more creative. I have to do it all over again or just parts?

Re: amanhecer

Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2016 1:52 pm
by Pepe
You can just do a new one, making cool parts and creating or using a cool background. This map can go to archive

Re: amanhecer

Posted: Mon Mar 21, 2016 5:27 pm
by Gulino
NOT NEED TO DO A NEW I THINK THAT I CAN IMPROVE IT

Re: amanhecer

Posted: Fri Apr 01, 2016 8:54 pm
by Gulino
new version of the map, please check if you have errors