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Ewgad

Posted: Mon Jul 25, 2016 10:52 pm
by CidrusFa
First map!
Hope compliance.
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[mod=Index]moved the screenshots to a spoiler :p[/mod]

Re: Ewgad

Posted: Wed Jul 27, 2016 3:57 pm
by RayB.
The map is not really good. I think u can understand this since It's your first map. You should read the Mapper Rules and look for some Tutorials or help from other tees to make your next map better.

Ewgad

Posted: Mon Aug 01, 2016 6:41 pm
by CidrusFa
Hi!
This map moderate 3 * * *
The map by:Ciniminix
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Re: Ewgad

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2016 11:33 am
by Index
Merged the topics, no need to create a new thread. Furthermore I moved the screenshots to spoilers again. Seems like you reworked your map, don't know if that is enough or if you should have just created a totally new map. But let's hear other opinions.
The tags are wrong now, still can't change them .__.

Re: Ewgad

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2016 9:04 pm
by CidrusFa
That's good?

Re: Ewgad

Posted: Tue Aug 02, 2016 9:40 pm
by VipeR
Sorry,

map is in a terrible state. Bugs wherever i look. boring parts. Most Images a not embedded. Pls read the Mapper Rules before you post a map.
An example
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This is how the map looks to us!
This is how the map looks to us!
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Rejected.

Re: Ewgad

Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2016 2:10 am
by CidrusFa
I'm sorry that I took so many amateur mistakes stone.
Thanks for the link.
Fixed an amateur mistakes, in theory, it should be good.
But something I do not understand why you have such a large file? (812 kb)

Thanks for the help..

Re: Ewgad

Posted: Wed Aug 03, 2016 2:08 pm
by aaa
checked with Welf and we and had to agree with VipeR, most parts are either very repetitive or annoying
for example avoid using so many 1 tile holes they're just not fun and often cause the players to fail..
also you put tune zones in many parts but they have no effect? :o
to be honest i think you should start a new map and try to map less repetitive stuff :/

btw in the first posted versions there was no endline, no embedded images.. double check your maps before posting please, it only takes you a few minutes and saves time for everyone testing the map! if you don't have anywhere to host it you can use https://trashmap.timakro.de/ for now to test it online or with friends!
but it's ok for a first map, still better than most people's first try!

Re: Ewgad

Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2016 9:09 pm
by CidrusFa
After a long time,I tried to improve everything on my map,and that I could pull out :D
I hope you have a bit better ..

Ewgad *Improved*

Posted: Thu Aug 11, 2016 10:38 pm
by CidrusFa
After a long time,I tried to improve everything on my map,and that I could pull out :D
I hope you have a bit better ..