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Jazz Hands - by Jimmy Jazz [Dummy 3*]

Posted: Tue Apr 18, 2017 6:29 pm
by Jimmy Jazz The 1st
New dummy map. Hope you enjoy ^^ No logo at the moment though.

(Ps, i really like the white moon if you haven't noticed)
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Re: Jazz Hands - by Jimmy Jazz [Dummy 3*]

Posted: Wed Apr 19, 2017 5:17 pm
by teddi
Hi :)
i spy with my little eye something small above cp 3
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it has grown hair!
it has grown hair!
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Re: Jazz Hands - by Jimmy Jazz [Dummy 3*]

Posted: Thu Apr 20, 2017 7:29 pm
by Jimmy Jazz The 1st
Haha thanks teddi xD Will upload fix another time when needed :P

Re: Jazz Hands - by Jimmy Jazz [Dummy 3*]

Posted: Sun Apr 30, 2017 8:17 pm
by meew'
.. a girly i cant get cause she dont get to many likes //offtopic

Re: Jazz Hands - by Jimmy Jazz [Dummy 3*]

Posted: Tue May 02, 2017 9:49 am
by Jimmy Jazz The 1st
I don't expect how i'm supposed to just improve without any feedback. And it's not just this time. I spent many months working on Arcadian, only to have stormphonix do 3 gameplay checks. It's kinda demotivating when you have testers that seem very limited in what they are willing to test (Mostly working, ready maps). With all my maps, it seems like i cant get any solid feedback. So yea. Some guidance would be really helpful, instead of being left in the dark 90% of the time.

Re: Jazz Hands - by Jimmy Jazz [Dummy 3*]

Posted: Tue May 02, 2017 10:23 am
by jao
For design: Don't spam so many doodads and only place few or none in freeze/tele. Also get rid of your strange unhook structures.
For gameplay: More space and don't make everything as hard as possible. If you don't have to do the perfect trick it's more enjoyable mostly. The basics of the map are good tho.

Re: Jazz Hands - by Jimmy Jazz [Dummy 3*]

Posted: Tue May 02, 2017 6:09 pm
by Tropo
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i agree with jao this map is way to difficult and most parts you have to do perfect.
I really tried to play this map but at every 2. part there was something "insane".

Re: Jazz Hands - by Jimmy Jazz [Dummy 3*]

Posted: Tue May 02, 2017 9:26 pm
by Jimmy Jazz The 1st
Thanks Jao and Tropo.

I was working on the fix and already fixed some of the things you mentioned Tropo. I have also simplified almost every single part. I have played through the map about 3 times today trying to get everything perfect, so i hope all is ok now.

@Jao - What do you mean remove the weird unhook structures?
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Re: Jazz Hands - by Jimmy Jazz [Dummy 3*]

Posted: Sun May 07, 2017 5:39 pm
by Tropo
I took again a close look on this map because in my opinion it has a lot of potential :P
found some bugs and some things you probably dont know.
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Re: Jazz Hands - by Jimmy Jazz [Dummy 3*]

Posted: Mon May 08, 2017 12:51 pm
by Jimmy Jazz The 1st
Thanks a lot Tropo. I really appreciate it.

I fixed all except the CP 14 'skip' and i also couldn't seem to find the entity bug you pointed out? Can you explain whats wrong there?

And i also noticed some missing grass top in one of your screens :D
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