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EDVIOL by Vik_Thor [Brutal]
Posted: Thu May 04, 2017 9:41 pm
by Vik_Thor
Hello, I just finished my first DDrace map (Brutal). A map which I created specially for DDnet servers. It would be a honor for me if it would be realesed on the official DDnet servers. That's why I wondered if a moderator could check it and of course realsed it if he find it nice. Here is some pictures of the map itself. Enjoy,thank you.
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Re: New DDrace map <3
Posted: Thu May 04, 2017 9:49 pm
by StorмPʜöɴix
Title: EDVIOL by Vik_Thor [Difficulty]
Mabye also add the mapfile otherwise its gonna be hard to test
Re: New DDrace map <3
Posted: Thu May 04, 2017 10:52 pm
by Vik_Thor
oki thx ^^
Re: New DDrace map <3
Posted: Fri May 05, 2017 3:23 am
by sorgaxD
Nice map! It has good parts, I love this kind of map <3 but the design has nothing really special :/
First of all, freeze should be #000000 (black) with something like 120 Alpha.
Found this:
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- The logo should be behind. Also the spawn room has to be bigger.
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- Here we can see 2 parts with the same design, but the left image is undeep and the right is unfreeze. Use other tile to differenciate them, and I suggest you to not spam that sun, it looks bad xD
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Re: EDVIOL by Vik_Thor [Brutal]
Posted: Fri May 05, 2017 6:09 pm
by Vik_Thor
I think its better now ! <3
Re: EDVIOL by Vik_Thor [Brutal]
Posted: Sat May 06, 2017 4:43 pm
by Vik_Thor
bon apres ca ?
Re: EDVIOL by Vik_Thor [Brutal]
Posted: Sat May 06, 2017 4:49 pm
by teddi
Hi Vik_Thor, i did a short test of your map. Here are some bugs and suggestions from me
- You forgot to mark the death tiles
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- Same here ^^
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- Tele-to tiles (yellow) should be placed 1 tile above the ground like did at tele 2. And you can also add another one
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- I think sorgaxD meant to make the startroom wider to avoid blocking (afk) tees. It should fit at least 20 tees
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- I was able to skip the bottom drag part and only went up with my dummy through hammerthrowing.
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- Suggestion: Maybe add some more space there or make the death part solo. That is only my opinion, maybe u disagree.
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About my last photo:
1. Imo there should be a warning on the left where u fall down, that it is faily.
2. tele-to 3 has the same problem as mentioned before.
3. The teleport in the finish line is unmarked (also on the right of it) --> I accidentally go into tele and finish but i wanted to help tees that failed behind me. I suggest making a little end room with the marked tele 4.
Hopefully i could help you
greetz,
-teddi
Re: EDVIOL by Vik_Thor [Brutal]
Posted: Sun May 07, 2017 12:24 pm
by Vik_Thor
oki thx for all i think i have correct my faults , its really better now ty <3
Re: EDVIOL by Vik_Thor [Brutal]
Posted: Mon May 08, 2017 1:46 pm
by Vik_Thor
After that ?
Re: EDVIOL by Vik_Thor [Brutal]
Posted: Mon May 08, 2017 2:17 pm
by teddi
Just wait for more testers to test your map. If you hang out a bit on the test servers, someone will come
*edit: forgot this little thing, only 2 tiles missing freeze. thats it.
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