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Freeze world by Black widdow [Moderate]
Posted: Sat Sep 30, 2017 8:17 pm
by honk
Hi, this is kinda my first map, and the map is dummy friendly. I would be happy about some opinions.
Re: Freeze world by Black widdow [Moderate]
Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2017 1:28 pm
by Deeper
Sorry, but map is bad.
check this rules before add a map to the forum:
viewtopic.php?f=9&t=722
will be Reject
Re: Freeze world by Black widdow [Moderate]
Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2017 6:58 pm
by honk
Okay, Thank you for looking at my Map. But could you maybe be a little bit more specific? Because then i would know what exactly to improve for my next map. And which of the rules are not fulfilled?
Re: Freeze world by Black widdow [Moderate]
Posted: Sun Oct 01, 2017 8:01 pm
by Deeper
well,
- Basics "uncreative" parts
- Very bad and unplayable design
- Every entity that the player should know about should likewise be clearly marked with a visible tile ~ rules
Just look on other moderate maps and try to make a really good map
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Re: Freeze world by Black widdow [Moderate]
Posted: Wed Oct 04, 2017 9:31 pm
by Lumina
Tested the map with some dude.
Have to agree with deeper.
the map has Bad parts,
it looks so uncreativ.
The parts itself looks Like you mapped in 5 minutes, and didnt tested, that meight could work.
some tele are missing.
the map gets fast boring and should not get released in ddnet.
That all from my side.
[mod=jao]Moved the topic to Archive. Also, the mapfile's name should include only the map name.[/mod]
Re: Freeze world by Black widdow [Moderate]
Posted: Tue Oct 10, 2017 1:37 pm
by honk
Okay Thanks for your effort. I will try to do it better next time!