My third try :D

[Skeptar]

Here guys is my third try (with a other background color, ...).
I hope you like it.
-> I dont want add everywhere unfreeze i hope thats okay, because i like it without (its harder to get a nice time)

best.map

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And i hope you are now happy Index

[Skeptar]

I found some fails. Here is the new Version.

best.map

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[Index]

Hey,
I didn't test your map yet (will probably do that tomorrow), but I quickly looked at it and was surprised that it's almost 1mb large. Unfortunately you didn't pay attention to my last post in your other map topic, you embdeed again many standard tilesets (1mb -> 100kb) (: I fixed that for you, cleaned up the embdeed graphics and slightly changed the unhookable color, of course that's only a suggestion and you can decide which version you prefer. Oh, and don't get me wrong, you improved a lot and your version is nice as well, you just have to un-embdeed some tilesets (as described in my other post in your other topic) anyways :D

[Skeptar]

Ups i didnt noticed it :s
I will never do it again (hope so)

And yes this colors looks better

[Index]

It's no problem at all, that you didn't noticed it at first. Now you know it and you can pay attention to it (and if you forgot it again it's also not that bad :p)
So anyways, I quickly tested your map with super and /pause. I have to say, it's impressive how much you improved. I really liked the map (although it's kinda faily, but that's not necessarily a bad thing :D).
Here are few little things I noticed, but beside that the map is really good, seems already bugfree and we should definitely take it (:

[Skeptar]

The problem i can change it but i dont have the colors now^^

picture1: I love parts like this and i asked some more and they said its fine
picture2: True i can make the hookthrough a bit longer
picture3: Yes!
picture4: No sry i placed there a tele = you can try it a bit longer (if you "fail")

But i will change it then i upload it maybe you can change the color and upload it again

[Skeptar]

Picture2: i changed the freeze to a tele.

Here the new map (index change the colors again pls and upload it) ^^

best.map

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[Index]

Ok, new and maybe already final version is on the testservers (:
In my opinion you should just think of another map name and after an addtional test run it can be released.

[Skeptar]

Thats awesome!!

Maybe the name "Doable" is cool.
Yes lets call the map "Doable"
Next time i think early about the name ^^

Is that a moderate map?

[Index]

Hmm, I think there are better names for that map but well, it's your decision (:
I would say it is Moderate 3* (like your other map)