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Take it noobly

Post by Ñı©Ø »

My new short novice map... maybe 2*
This my first map with a complicated design, so i accept hints
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Don't make the contrasts so big. From the screenshot the red grass is too bright imo.
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waaaaaaay too red
Nico please use darker or more 'gray' or pastel colors to make it not that eye cancering
it's really bad for my head as it makes me feel dizzy
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Re: Take it noobly

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Also both sun & logo is blurred due to being stretched too much. (from what is visible on screenshot)
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Re: Take it noobly

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Why do you do always short maps? Some longer novice maps would be cool too .. ;)
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Silex wrote:Why do you do always short maps? Some longer novice maps would be cool too .. ;)
It's my mapping style xD

Thank you all for suggestions...

Is it better now?
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yes
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Re: Take it noobly

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Yes way better, you see the difference? It's much more enjoyable and your eyes don't get hurt :P
Sun and logo are still blurred.
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[...] and after the battle there was no longer visible grass, everything drowned in a sea of blood...
~Or something like that...
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Re: Take it noobly

Post by Ñı©Ø »

Meliodafu wrote:Sun and logo are still blurred.
I made the logo in a better way: first it was 255 255 255 255 now...
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i removed the sun ( it looks ugly ), and i put the shields on the "rifle part" more right... in this way i prevent noob's fails
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I even did a demo because i see even who is not tester wants to help me with some stuff...
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And that is, if you want to see the whole map in zoom-, a screen:
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