[Novice]GeRollA

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[Novice]GeRollA

Post by Evoli »

Hell DDnetwork community heres a new map from me. :D
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Re: [Novice]GeRollA

Post by Index »

Hey,
I quickly tested your map with my dummy and I have to say, I love it :3 All your novice maps are really good and that one is no exception. The design is simple but good and the gameplay is fine. Here are some things I noticed:
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that part is kinda useless cause you can can easily enable entities, but idk. you dont have to change it :D
that part is kinda useless cause you can can easily enable entities, but idk. you dont have to change it :D
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maybe add a text there that you have to go up? i failed there because i just went down ._.
maybe add a text there that you have to go up? i failed there because i just went down ._.
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maybe too hard in comparison with the rest of the map?
maybe too hard in comparison with the rest of the map?
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why you can get shotgun there for the next 2-3 parts?
why you can get shotgun there for the next 2-3 parts?
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the two black lines there do not look good :(
the two black lines there do not look good :(
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replace the arrow in the top and in the bottom line with >>-stopper?
replace the arrow in the top and in the bottom line with >>-stopper?
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the ninja is like many other weapons on that map kinda useless but you do not have to change that (:
the ninja is like many other weapons on that map kinda useless but you do not have to change that (:
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the two black lines next to each other do not look good
the two black lines next to each other do not look good
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remove the arrows to make it a bit more challenging
remove the arrows to make it a bit more challenging
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quads are not 'aspect ratio'-ed (;
quads are not 'aspect ratio'-ed (;
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Re: [Novice]GeRollA

Post by Evoli »

Fixed the bugs.

The part with the shotgun is just for fun :)
you dont has to do it but you can :D
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Re: [Novice]GeRollA

Post by Lady Saavik »

MrAppendix said he's writing something here so it must be really long if it takes few hours.
And I was waiting with my opinion for him (I didn't want to show the same bugs).

Index - here are many fake parts, useless weapons and rooms. It's ok.
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Re: [Novice]GeRollA

Post by Evoli »

So it can be released?oO
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Re: [Novice]GeRollA

Post by Lady Saavik »

If you don't care what I have to say :(
I will have time in 1,5h.
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Re: [Novice]GeRollA

Post by Evoli »

ok understood!
I will wait, if you and your partner will counter some tips for me. I didnt red right sorry :O
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Re: [Novice]GeRollA

Post by Lady Saavik »

Looks like your every map will have double L in name ;)
Nice to see that you're trying to make creative parts, use few features.
But doesn't it look a bit cluttered when you have so many shields, switches?
Will be released.

Group #2 is empty - delete. Same with Tune layer.
About screenshots - you don't have to make it too easy. It's mapper decision.
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Re: [Novice]GeRollA

Post by Evoli »

Ok, the bugs are now fixed and the parts are not so faily anymore :), can be realeased all is fine ^^
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Map is now releasable :)
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