[Novice]Ovell

[Evoli]

Hello DDnetcommunity,
this time a easy Novice map

[imp]

Most things worked well, allthough it was no real challenge for me :p

I really liked that pleasant background . I can't really empathise in beginner but I think they will like the map since it's not monotonous

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[Evoli]

ok the Contrast and the Speed Up was fixed

but i dont will change the map from screenshoot 2 and 4

Screenshoot 2 :

You think that the beginners would be not get the part ?
-Wrong.This part is for a beginner a bit hard but easy to understand it,some parts like this is in novice too so.......
dont worry Imp.

Scrennshoot 4:

It should be marked that the blue balls should'nt attacked you if you are over this grey
marked tile,its not that pointless what you think .

Anyway the arrows and the contrast is fixed.

[imp]

I mean the blue balls don't walk around the corner but I was just wondering :p

[Evoli]

ah ok
but you know what i mean.

[Lady Saavik]

nice to see next novice map from you (and that you improved your moderate map)
you had few really good ideas!
but still, I will suggest you some changes Ofc you don't have to fix everything like I want it

[Evoli]

i have changed the map, what was in the map.

Enjoy the Hug and spawn room saavik

[Lady Saavik]

Evoli you do really good job at fixing (and mapping ofc).

I did few really small fixes (like 5sec door and not 6, made tele FROM1 red, so you don't fall into freeze, moved shields 2 tiles >> next to tele 9). I could post the suggestions here but it's just faster to fix it and release map, I hope you understand me.

And I'm sorry about http://forum.ddnet.org/download/file.php ... &mode=view I was wrong.
I fixed it back, I thought you made it with Game and Front layer because it was so dark, I see how you understood me, I could explain it better ^^

I moved Front layer after Game layer, now hookthrough looks better for people playing with entities.

Map can be released, Novice 3*