Arcadian by Jimmy Jazz [Brutal]

[Jimmy Jazz The 1st]

Hello again ^^

I have my latest map ready. It is a lower brutal map. I would like to meet with testers in game so i can run them through the map and get suggestions on hand. But also feel free to test it in your own time

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[meew']

no gameplay check but the map looks kinda cool for me someways i like the coulours use maybe a but less doodads will do to xd

[Jimmy Jazz The 1st]

Thanks meew' ^^

I will tone down the doodads just a bit that's not a problem

[teddi]

As i already told you, I just had a quick look at design/graphic stuff

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i guess these are bugs.

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same or was it on purpose? btw i think normal (straight lines) cp design would look better throughout map.

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+freeze

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Maybe remove the unhook behind the ht? Looks better?

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I suggest using same freeze-edges here ^^

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in my opinion this tele corner thing looks weird, as if u could edge..

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same as 1.

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[RayB.]

Cool design Jimmy Jazz looks like a good mix of already known designs .

[VipeR]

Pls search your map for bugs before posting it here.

mostly missing freeze and blocks, design bugs and more

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[StorмPʜöɴix]

Heaya Jimmy,

Already took a look on your map before it was posted here with you, and i really appreciate that you already change a lot of stuff ^^
But i guess while chaning and trying to make a lot of parts better you messed up ALOT entities.

Didnt had enough time to test your map till the end (Probably not even to 50%) but still i can give you some tasks to do :P
Here we go.

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Startline isnt looking that good

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Add unfreez on "Totele" on everypart where its necessary

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Move Deep up, so you cant fall inside the deep by accident (Or add Stoppers so something like that)

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Freezedges? All over the Map

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In my opinion this part is a bit to hard, mabye lower freez a bit

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Bit annoying at most in bigger groups, would remove the freez on the top (where unfreez is below)

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Please change the red colored area to tele its really faily, or make that part easier (The rest can stay killtiles)

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Please replace it with hook, its so annoying in my opinion ^^

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Mess up Entite, Its supossed to be hook, but instead its unhook

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Hint: Welf didnt turn into an a Witch and can fly ;) (entitiebugs)

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Dont know if i didnt got the trick, but the end of that deep part is pretty tough

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No need to use CP here, just use FROMTELE3 to TOTELE3 (or which tele is available)

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Mark that unfreez

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Once both got into FROMTELE5 thats the end, just add CPs there on Sides (Cange Bluemarked Tele to CFRMTele)

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Lower TOTELE to one block above the ground (All over the Map)

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Looks ugly

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Add CP where i marked them to blue (delate the other ones ofc) Probably more of them over the whole map, just look over it by yourself for once again ^^. (dont wonder about totele, i messed a thing up in paint x))

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Easy Skip, use CP

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So far i can say that he Map has some nice orignial Parts and Design, its a bit unbalanced till this point mabye i gonna talk about that with you ingame.
But well i also already seen a few alike parts in other maps ;)

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Guess i already seen that part :P

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Mabye there are more alike Parts like this, but after the short overview, i only seen one more thats alike to another map nexto the shown Part.
Also take a overlook on the whole Map and improve Tele, Entitebugs and some Designissues. :)

[Jimmy Jazz The 1st]

Firstly just want to say thanks a lot Rayb, it means alot coming from an amazing designer like yourself

@teddi : Thank you for the test, i really appreciate it ^^ fixed all the bugs.

@Viper : My word i am so sorry for all the bugs you spotted and reported. I can assure it won't happen again . But, i fixed all of the bugs except for the suggestion to add un hookable over the jungle vine. (It only looks weird with overlayed entities, but that's it, and there are far too many over the map so it would just look weird.)
Also, one of the main reasons i get so many bugs is because my ddnet client deletes a random layer every now and then. Biggest pain in the ass. So far i have re placed about every single layer. I just started keeping regular backups of my map.

@Stormphonix : Thank you for your thorough test and suggestions. I have fixed them all and also changed some other parts to make the overall flow of the map better. I also completely re worked the generic part in your second spoiler. Also, the deep part where you couldn't get the trick, its very simple. You just need to throw the dummy up right, swing round and catch when the tee is above you. It should bring it round the tele quite easily.

I would really like to meet with you in game so we can go over some of the parts that might need balancing. I am almost always online so feel free to just look on South African servers to find me or i will be spectating on international servers

If i missed any of your bugs and suggestions after all your hard work, sorry

+ meeew' i removed some doodads so its a little less cluttered now ^^

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[Jimmy Jazz The 1st]

Sort of missed a couple design issues ._.

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[Jimmy Jazz The 1st]

Tested with Stormphonix. Updated some parts + added checkpoints where needed.

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