Akelagon by texnonik & Potato|co [Moderate/Brutal]

[jao]

Map has a DDmax style with edgehook parts. It's pretty bad mapped and the design is horrible. It's okay because you are a beginner, but you need to learn how to convert your ideas into good parts. More testing (by yourself and friends) could be usefull for that.

Rejected.

[texnonik]

Map has a DDmax style with edgehook parts. It's pretty bad mapped and the design is horrible. It's okay because you are a beginner, but you need to learn how to convert your ideas into good parts. More testing (by yourself and friends) could be usefull for that.

Rejected.

I am not a begginer already ..... i am creating for long my maps .....
My parts are not good why ? Can you explain that ? There is one part that i dont like a bit ...

[jao]

Your parts arent nice to play. As I said the ideas are mostly fine, but its not enjoyable to play your parts. Either they are too long/hard/tight/complicated etc. If you don't see that by yourself you should ask others to help you with testing and to give you honest feedback.

[texnonik]

So Cellengen helped with design , remaked all parts , new name of the map .

[Cellegen]

.__. ye, now so teeish :3

[jao]

Tested with Ravie.
The rework didn't really improve the map. Parts are still ddmax-ish, unbalanced and bad mapped. Also a lot copied parts (mostly from Nostalgia). Design is better, but still not that good.
Overall the map is at max decent, but for sure not good enough to be released.

[Welf]

I don't think that this map has anyhting to do with ddmax... Just translate the word "ddmax", the mapper understands you.

[Cellegen]

and ofc ddmax maps cannot be releasing anyway ;cccc