Cloud Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

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Re: Moon Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

Post by N9mkOik:D »

Bugs fixed
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Re: Moon Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

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No bugged :D
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Re: Moon Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

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Fix 2 skip
thx jao
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Re: Moon Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

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Tested the map.

Gameplay looks pretty decent and should overall be balanced.

Design is rather flawed:
  • Structure is not clean. These unhook lines should be made as squares (like Back in the days, Stronghold etc.) and not in a "round" shape.
  • The beams (group #5) should be transparent (lower alpha) and more saturated.
  • Freeze/tele marking should use triangle corners instead of round ones in most cases (see this tutorial)
  • Walljump marking should be blue-ish, green doesn't fit
  • Tele marking should always be the same color - sometimes you have freeze marking under it wich leads to a different color
  • Freeze/tele markings shouldn't be cut off, but closed with corners
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Bad TO-tele position, possible to run into freeze accidentaly
Bad TO-tele position, possible to run into freeze accidentaly
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Bad TO-tele position, likely to run into tele to the right wich is annoying. Also, CP should be unskipable.
Bad TO-tele position, likely to run into tele to the right wich is annoying. Also, CP should be unskipable.
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Useless CP; there are no teles in this part
Useless CP; there are no teles in this part
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CP should be where the red marking is. Also, it's possible to fall down accidentaly. Should be prevented somehow.
CP should be where the red marking is. Also, it's possible to fall down accidentaly. Should be prevented somehow.
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Remove freeze so players don't jump into it after being teleported
Remove freeze so players don't jump into it after being teleported
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You can jump on the marked edge instead of doing the part with shotgun
You can jump on the marked edge instead of doing the part with shotgun
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Remove the marked blocks to make the part a bit more convenient
Remove the marked blocks to make the part a bit more convenient
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What is the purpose of this weird construction? :D
What is the purpose of this weird construction? :D
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Add an entities off sign here
Add an entities off sign here
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Remove this tele so people don't run into it after being teleported. Also mark jetpack somehow.
Remove this tele so people don't run into it after being teleported. Also mark jetpack somehow.
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These one tile holes are annoying if you move after being teleported
These one tile holes are annoying if you move after being teleported
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Wrong CP marking color
Wrong CP marking color
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Add a tele here
Add a tele here
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Re: Moon Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

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Removed almost all the errors which you told me.
I left cp4 So that people do not skip if fell from cp5
What you noticed on the design I'm not all fixed because I did not understand
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Re: Cloud Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

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#5A87C8 would be a good color for group #5.
It's still annoying to walk into the tele on the left side of CTO 1 after being teleported.
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Corners should be like on the right side on the whole map
Corners should be like on the right side on the whole map
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Move CTO 4 to the right
Move CTO 4 to the right
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I suggest to remove this freeze design to make the edge more obvious
I suggest to remove this freeze design to make the edge more obvious
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I suggest to add a CP here
I suggest to add a CP here
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Should be impossible to fail on either of the edges
Should be impossible to fail on either of the edges
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Entity bug
Entity bug
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I still don't like this. Better remove the tele and freeze completely IMO.
I still don't like this. Better remove the tele and freeze completely IMO.
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This shield looks useless to me
This shield looks useless to me
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Re: Cloud Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

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Done
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Re: Cloud Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

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lmao jao ur entities ugly af
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Re: Cloud Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

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Really, more bugs, this need add to corners to tele and freezes
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It was released or declined.

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Re: Cloud Dreams by N9mkOik [Solo]

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Added all bugs to corners , a little too much
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