Jungle Cave by TNT [Dummy]

[TNT]

Here is my first dummy map ^^. I hope you will enjoy it .

Jungle Cave.map

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[teddi]

Hi there,

I played it on test server and hope its the right version there.
Imo parts are balanced and nice, maybe not to special.
Design is good.

I think u should change these little things:

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i dont understand why u placed that, confusing

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change so hook and weapons arent visible in ground, looks better?

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place tee behind freeze like in most maps, looks better?

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hope this was a bit helpful..

-teddi

[TNT]

It was helpful ! I didn't notice the hook and freeze things, I changed it. Here is the second version ^^ .

Jungle Cave.map

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[pixel]

BEST DUMMY MAP EVER
Enjoyed playing really (played 4 times best time 7 minutes ._. (LOW))
Hope it get released soon


Just found while playing
I just found this 2 "cuts"

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[Silex]

1.71 MB ? I didn't check the map in editor but i guess there are some unused/useless images which you can remove.

[RayB.]

1.71 MB ? I didn't check the map in editor but i guess there are some unused/useless images which you can remove.

!!!

Every image you included in your map is actually used. (used images are green)
Correct images are embedded into your map. These images are included with every Teeworlds client and therefore do not need to be embedded:
bg_cloud1, bg_cloud2, bg_cloud3, desert_doodads, desert_main, desert_mountains, desert_mountains2, desert_sun, generic_deathtiles, generic_unhookable, grass_doodads, grass_main, jungle_background, jungle_deathtiles, jungle_doodads, jungle_main, jungle_midground, jungle_unhookables, moon, mountains, snow, stars, sun, winter_doodads, winter_main, winter_mountains, winter_mountains2, winter_mountains3
All other images must be embedded.

TNT you should make some of your used tilesets/quads external. Not all need to be embedded.

[Index]

No testing, just quickly fixed your tilesets and added dummy server configurations .__.

[Cellegen]

Wow... this is really good map... I like it.
I hope its 3 stars because of not failable parts, funny parts and all of weapons both use.
But...
[color=#000000]I found just one texture bug and just one bad work (my mean)[/color]

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First: TEXTURE BUG

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Second: FREEZE ISNT WORK

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[TNT]

Okay ! Thank you everyone, you helped me a lot ! ^^ Yep, as I said, it's my first map x) . So I try to change every things you mention ^^. There is only the first "cut" that mentioned pixel where I'm unhappy of the result ... If anyone have an idea ^^.

Here is the third version of the map x) :

Jungle Cave.map

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[Cellegen]

GOTHA A CHEAT!

[color=#000000]For real pros: cheat with shotgunfly[/color]

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Add some switches for no hacking!