sloppymap

[sloppydog]

this my fisrt map hope its good for DDNet

[stompie]

Looks like a good map to me
Maybe add a logo and change name or is the name "sloppymap"
Bunch of stuff tho that u need to check out but worth the release sometime in the future
parts at start seem to be bouncing in difficulty more to the end it seems fine
Parts are fun Design is nice ish the green stuff near end is not nice
but dear lord your layers (more confusing than mine) do something with them if its possible i see you have lots of colored freezes some nice others not



PS: can someone put this on test server so i can ingame tell him all the thinns bit to much for just screenshots and id like show the thing im explaining

[sloppydog]

the name of the map is sloppymap,and it would be nice if you could show me what's wrong in person

[sloppydog]

i have edited abit in map thanks to stompie and Soapy Sandwich
if anyone wants to give me tips your more than welcome to

[StorмPʜöɴix]

Looks like a old ddmax map to me, at most if you look on the first area, there isnt really something new in there. Later on in the map, you seem to get better, but still you would need to improve your parts alot. Since 70% of this Map looks like ddmax, i dont think its gonna make its way to the ddnet servers. I suggest you to rather create a new map, since its not really worth rework. And mabye use a little better colour-combination

Just keep on going, remember: All beginnings are difficult. ^^

[pixel]

Hi, it's not a bad map, but it is not that balanced, and some Logical Fails ^^
Here are some suggestions and Bugs

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[Wartopeth]

Hi, I tried fixing the bugs by myself (cause are a lot and I dont want to post over 100 screenshots...) but I suggest you to make a new project with more space and homogeneous parts and then, when your map is finished, show your project to one experienced tester/mapper before posting a map here.
It's not a bad map but needs more effort.

[sloppydog]

thank you so much,i hoped it would be good,now i know what to do for next try ,all tips and suggestions you gave me i will try use in future

[jao]

Just listen to the tipps you got and make sure the map has no bugs (test with 50% entities before posting).

Moving this to archive