Persian Land By StarSeries IX

[Ñı©Ø]

I tested your map and I'm sorry to say that it won't get released... It was a good attempt though... my first map was worse... I love how you put all the dummy stuff like rocket fly, drag, aim xD together to make this map... I did the same with my first one... I will give you some suggestions for the next map, but I think that when you'll improve you'll become a really great mapper!

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You don't really have to mind fixing the map because in my opinion you don't have any chances of getting it released... I showed you the main bugs just so you could improve in the next maps! The first map done by a mapper and uploaded here will never be released first try... but, as I said, it was a good attempt!

OH AND ALSO REMOVE THE LUCKY PART BECAUSE PLAYERS COULD JUST SPECTATE AND SEE WHERE THE TELEPORT LEAD!!!!
So just don't do lucky parts in your maps

I know I'm doing some shameless self promotion but you may want to watch this video series to learn how to map better... I explain basically everything... when I did those video though I didn't know English very well so I could have a weird and annoying accent... sry about that lol
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nGtnr2p7LdY&t=48s

[sinamotraghi]

tnx so much for testing my maps. im one of your big fans:D i like your maps speciaمly the ice water (the scond map i had finished. the first one was sunny land:D) and the space station.
i will listen to your advice and i Respect that. its ok my map dont get released I had prepared myself to hear No answer.
i will try more next time.

[jao]

Thanks for explaining what was wrong Nico, will move this to archive.

[sinamotraghi]

how can i make the player dont go behind the text and the decorations?

[RayB.]

The layer behind the game layer are behind the tee. The layer in front of the game layer are in front of the tee.
So put your tilesets/quads in a layer behind the game layer.