twisted centrifuge (Moderate)

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twisted centrifuge (Moderate)

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Hello ddnet community :)

This is my first map so i hope its not too buggy! However i think its a good one so enjoy it!

Ps.I dont know how to attach a picture(logo) to the document!
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Re: twisted centrifuge

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I don't think, that this map is releasable... :(
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Re: twisted centrifuge

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Why? : o
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Re: twisted centrifuge

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The Idea behind the map is nice, but it is sooooo bad implemented, the Design is damn good but maybe u should start to use edges, cause this dont looks good.
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then u can do some signs better like this
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And maybe dont use the white thing to do a guy deep
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otherwise u should watch on the Design
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And a pretty IMPORTANT thing is to embed the layers (Red) and remove the useless stuff (blue)
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It exist 14636346 other things that i can tell u but first its enought, fix the Whole map or start a new (i would start a new XD)
many important things u can read here ---> http://forum.ddnet.org/viewtopic.php?f=9&t=722

Before u upload a map here ask a mapper (me XDD) or a tester, trail tester, moderator,................ for help, to watch over the map, cause this map is never ever releaseable.
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Re: twisted centrifuge

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Hm well i tryed and it was fun but looks like its not gonna happen xD
Here would be the fixed map
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Re: twisted centrifuge

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For first map its not bad,But for DDNet its bad, please look Mapper rules
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Re: twisted centrifuge

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I think you should try to make new map. It's not even worth of reworking.
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Re: twisted centrifuge (Moderate)

Post by hi_leute_gll »

Yeah, the concept is nice. But even simple things like the embedded images are wrong. As Deeper said you should take a look on our Mapper Rules, also the Mapping Guide can be helpful for you. Archive.
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